Rainbow Factory

Now I do like the way the rectangular shapes give off light. It appears as if some dangerous substance is being put together. I also like how three-dimensional you made the building look. However, there are a few criticisms I’d like to make. Firstly, I wouldn’t have a light be casted over Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo. If this is supposed to be a horror piece, then you should try to make it look as eerie as possible, and the light really detracts from that. Second, make sure that something is actually holding Scootaloo. For now, it just looks like she’s floating in mid-air. Now of course, this drawing isn’t terrible. It does have a bit of a haunting vibe to it, and even the pegasi’s faces seem to emote enough. Even for someone who has never read Rainbow Factory, I think this is pretty serviceable. I just think that the aforementioned criticisms should be taken into account. Still, I suggest that you keep up the great work, Fizzy68!